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Dear Sir or Madame,
In this writing, I am expressing my interest in attending UCCS in the fall of 2023. I am currently a senior student at Castle View High School in Castle Rock. I would be so excited to pursue my bachelors degree at your school and take my academic career further with you. Because of COVID, I have spent my junior and sophomore years online without any physical classes, but I am happy that in person learning is back now. Since I am a personable person in my studies and an outgoing student, this year, I am enjoying my time in school. Additionally, I have a dream of pursuing a career that I would be able to work hands on with people and be able to have a meaningful impact on people’s lives. Even though I am undecided on a major, I have a lot of passions that excite me to learn about. Currently, I have been working as a brand ambassador at Abercrombie and Fitch for about a year now. I think my job has taught me so many important skills and lessons that I will continue to bring with me my whole life. I believe that by attending UCCS next year I will have space to grow academically and socially. I enjoy being around new individuals and look forward to an exciting freshman year of college. Finally, even though moving into a whole new chapter of my young adult life can be scary, I think UCCS would be the perfect college for me to experience it at. After I was given the opportunity to tour your campus over this past summer I can very much picture myself there.
Thank you for taking the time to read my personal statement and consider my application. I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Sincerely,
Caitlin Miller.